The whole song just felt kind of empty. Your build up from :28 - :42 only served to make the song feel flatter by being very anticlimactic.
1:25 - The Sub kick overpowers the synth making it feel very hollow.
The melody is very incoherent and boring. There is almost no bass line to speak of.
I'm not trying to sound like a jackass but there is a lot that can be done with this song.
kind of repetitive