I <3 trance
So I hope you don't dissapoint.
Well, the beginning was kind of awkward... ?i could see it breaking into something big, but then you bring the bass, the kcik and the hat in, and that totally disturbs the flow. Maybe if you have the bassline fade in or something.
The general song is... alright... but theres not too much flow, the your hats are simply noise. I'd like to see more diversity in the synths.
Decent work, might be better if you worked on it a little more.