that wind in the back round sounded funny
It's a good thought, but it needs a good amount of work.
It needs to be longer. That should be plain enough.
Also, the little bit of automation in the beginning didn't really fit well. Try something else without the use of electronics. It is supposed to be classical, right?
Add a lot of more instruments. But I'm sure you had this planned anyway, at least I'd hope you would.
With that, I'm out.
the automation is to show its only a preview.. ty for comment :P
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