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I am working on this still. It is three minutes long, and starts with a bit of an up-beat, jazzy, sound, but turns to a more epic melody, then returning again in the end to the more upbeat.
I will fix any problems with the intro, where there are most likely to be problems.
And, I will add more sounds where lacking.
Anything else needing improvement will be gladly recognized.
I HOPE the volume isn't too loud, it's hard to tell from one set of headsets to another.
AND as I was doing some final tweaking I noticed on pattern was double layered, well that helped bring down the volume, when I deleted the second layer. BUT, that wasn't the only pattern that was double layered. So I'm quite disappointing that I got it sounding right with improperly used layers, and I'm too scared I'd ruin it if I got rid of all the duplicated layers.
quite the tale...


I'd remove everything before 0:40, the intro really doesn't set up the listener well for the rest of the song. Apart from that, I like the percussion. It's really funky and adds atmosphere. The synth introduced about 1/3 of the way through is chill, relaxing and calm. Good job on that.

Next step to improve: Spend some time on the transitions between different segments on the song, the audience can sometimes notice the change too late and are caught by surprise. Although this can be good, use more common techniques to move from one part to the other. That way, the listener is prepared for another section, therefore the change isn't as dramatic and will comfort the listener to some extent.

If i post some pointers on every song, will that help? I want to make you realize where you could improve :)

Before this review is over, i'd like you to listen to my latest piece (Sine Heaven) and compare it with the previous songs. You'll see what i'm referring to when i blab on about transitions and whatnot :)

P.S. The song is still good, thought i'd let you know that i like it...


Opportune responds:

Yeah, the whole intro is how the song started, and then I got off track, so I should have ditched it. I did like the synth melody you spoke of- that was what kept me on for posting. :)
You were very generous with your review. :) thanks!
I will work on your pointers. :)

Interesting work here. the first 10 secs or so is hard to listen to, as in makes ears bleed, but not a bad tune

Opportune responds:

Alright, I'm on it. I will probably remove that whole segment.

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4.08 / 5.00

Mar 14, 2012
10:38 AM EDT
File Info
8.8 MB
3 min 50 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.