The Ledge was right man the intro builds epic and then it seems too transition too an all new song after the first 35 or so secs. Which is also a really good song, I just wish you would explore all the sound you touch on in this. Maybe stretch this track be more around 7 minutes because all the transitions you use are great just elaborate on it. Like Bob Ross says keep painting happy little trees like this and you'll do great.
Ifeel like this song is going to build up to something awesome, but it changes lanes and i can't really follow it...the individual sections are awesome, but together in one song, it sounds like an acoustic blender. great try, try expanding on one of the ideas in you song to get a REALLY kick ass song.
Thank you for the advice, I will take it into consideration in the future