When I first listened to the song I felt let down, not that the rapping was poor or the beat was flat, or boring but that this was just another "Bitches an coke" song. I feel that you could of developed the song a bit more, creating something truly different. As for the rapping, think more actually poetry next time.
haha I feel yeah. it was really just a joke in all honesty cause i dont actually rap, thanks though
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