I'm not saying that the song is bad, but the fact that you took premade loops and brought them together just strikes me as a lack of effort. Try to develop your own melodies and beats and hopefully you can one day make a great song of your own making, not that of compiled loops. Yet, the loops did happen to sound pretty good together, I will give you that :). But, good luck with the song making and I hope to see a great original piece one day.
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