Solid flow! Maybe step back a bit from the mic, you peak quite a bit which detracts from the flow. Anne Frank line was sick and I'm giving you nine in the hope that you bring more disses of that calibre to the comp. Good shit.
if there was 38 more MC'S like you in ths clabtrap this comp might actually be a bit funner.....i look forward to the battle Mr.Gambit. DOPE SHIT
Well, this is cool, but I feel like you can do better than this. You said so yourself. "son of the devil/gun and a shovel" was the rhyme that caught my ear. Hope you get into the contest.