now just hear me out, I'm not hating on your song. i'm giving feedback.
I think the kick needs to be punchier, the hats and claps shouldn't be so sharp, and to tune their volume down.
You should throw in some thick snares.
I know it's only 55 seconds, but you should make it longer and add a nice bassline.
There's thousands of different basses, so I can't really tell you what to use.
Obviously it needs a drop. d:
Try some sweeps for a buildup, and a melody somewhere.
It's just a little too bland right now.
But you're on the right track! (:
All is gracefully accepted, thanks i will have a look into what you have said.
Yeh i woke up at 6 am and was like lets do this, well i fail at snares always have always will :P.
I have a longer version done of it but its still a w.i.p and i dont like posting fulls on here more for soundcloud :).
um.. not bad, but why a rap tune? like, not a normal rap tune. i mean why did you mix techno with rap? alothough, rap has vocals, so i cant argue. still some good music so ill give it 4.5.
Its called dubstep ?