I liked it
This was something differant, its a decent sound, something unique and a nice and pleasent piece, has a nice and soft feel that flows nicely, there was some nice effects like the echo you can hear, This all had a "SIMPLE" feel but thats ok, i think thats what i likeed about it, so nice effort there, A decent tune you have here, pleasent, entertaining and overall pretty decent. sounds here, and i was generally happy with the outcome of it all.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So not much at all to improve on this i found it to be pretty solid, it had everything a good tune would have some nice effort and no improvments needed at this point.