This is kinda like techno - if its going to be "trancy" then heres the stuff its going to need (my feedback)
1. Fix the ntro - it sounds like a gun - use a cymbal crash - or a down sweep.
2. Increase the db strength -
3. Ur instruments need some reverb
4. Above all the song just sounds like its techno - so I would suggest beginning the piece with a string of kicks - and a stronger bass - preferably a strong synth.
If it sounds like techno, i'll let it be techno.
Oh, and... you might notice that the intro sound is the sound of a fireworks arrow blasting apart, so it's kind of intentional.