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Mar 7, 2012 | 2:34 PM EST
File Info
2.8 MB
3 min 3 sec
3.63 / 5.00

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Rated 3.63 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

I got bored after finishing my previous song and played around. This is the result. It's somewhat scattered as a result. Still, I was going to end it with a lot of orchestral work, but that would have sounded even more out of place.

So, what's wrong with it?



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It's not bad, but it does need some work. The organization like you said is scattered, so I won't go too in depth except to say that it needs more linear organization. The random silence between the sections really kills the flow of the track. Otherwise, it sounded pretty good bro, so I'd just say work on those parts and try to cycle back to the beginning maybe? That might be a good thing to do... Pretty good sample bro. :3

MisterJayElectro responds:

Wow, thanks! Considering I did this entire thing in a day, on/off, I guess that's pretty high praise. I have a lot of trouble with bridging A, B, C, etc, a lot of times, and I have even more trouble bringing it back to A, even though I always attempt it. Still, I guess I can try again with the next song. Thanks for the review!