ClabTrap - Alto - Gunning

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I aint taking no breaks my switch is on and never off and i am gunna go hard this year none stop watch me!

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And here was a cool tune, at first i didnt know what to expect but soon after as the music really kicked in it was actually pretty good and i really took a liking to it, so nice start to this as it shows lots of effort and a really interesting tune of sounds. This one was abit differant there was a voice at the start kind of neat and that makes it more unique, It was a simple beat but has a good sound to it and makes for some decent tune, I thought the "VOCALS" really pushed this forward and made it that much more interesting. And as this tune comes to an end i must say it was pretty decent, not sure what to improve on it but i enjoyed this piece and really look forward to more of this style soon, anyways great work here.

Well as above mentioned this is notbad at all, not sure where to make it better if it can be, as it already has a decent tone and sounds, but there is always room for making tracks better, so give it a try, try some new stuff, and try some of the ideas and tips in here, it wouldnt hurt to try atleast. So with that said I suppose my recomandation is maybe add more mixture of sounds, and some more build up in the backround wouldnt hurt.

A decent beat, half decent lyrics and good delivery. I think that's the way to summarise it.

I'm not a fan of the name "ClabTrap", as it sounds like an anachronism, for the word "claptrap". But still, that's not what I'm here to review. Listening to the lyrics, you seem to be caught in two minds as to whether or not you're rapping or singing. Blending the two together only seems to work for me if you have two different vocalists, usually of opposite genres, but Walk This Way worked well for Aerosmith and Run DMC.

I could do with the lyrics transcribed for the ease of following, as I've never been very good at following hip-hop vocals, for one reason or another. Just putting them out there helps the listener get in touch with what you're trying to say and even give them a chance to sing along, should the mood take them.

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Very sick beat this song had. Who was the little kid at the start, a sibling? The song has a nice rhythm to it though and the bass ling soothes you into hearing the lyrics of the song too. Great sounding song too, looking forward to future songs from you after hearing this one, neat!!

Thew bass line remains simple and moves to a different note depending on the beat of the rhythm which goes great when enjoying the song in all its entirety. The synth was great and layered too. The main layer plays like a wave enchanting you to keep on hearing while the one in the back seems to sooth you even further while hearing this.

The drum beat was pretty nice yet simple at the same time too. The vocals sound great, what kind of microphone setup are you using? Excellent beat!

Overall, very nice beat to listen to, good work here!!

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hellbound182 responds:

i use a regular mic on a mic stand infront of a bed thats pushed up against the wall :) glad the voice comes out the way it does

yo i loved this man. Great track. Nice flow, good beat, and entertaining. I could see this on somebody's ipod

I was so ready to h8 on ur late-breaking ass. But this is good.

However, I'm not wishing you good luck like all the other bozos in this thread. I want the good luck, and I don't want you to have any.

hellbound182 responds:

i will take that as a compliment! thanks man i wish u luck though!

Credits & Info

4.39 / 5.00

Mar 7, 2012
11:55 AM EST
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
2.8 MB
2 min 27 sec

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