I really like the violin playing in it. Lovely tune very relaxing. Now I don't have a keen musical ear but the quality sounded really good. I notice the different layers of music and it is very fitting for a game a cool animation :P
Thanks buddy. :)
I guess I'm a little puzzled about why you'd post something you're not happy with ... I suppose if you have rabid NG fans that keep pestering you to put something out ... but even then you're not doing service to your reputation by releasing something that you wouldn't consider very good. On to some actual review ...
I actually like it in a general sense ... the layers are varied but still fit together, and manage to mostly stay actual layers, not just a garbled heap. Unfortunately, the key word is "mostly." They don't seem to quite fit right timing-wise (a little quantization would help perhaps?), which makes it super mushy by the end. Like where you were going, but the lack of polish ultimately kills the end result. Keep it up, you clearly know what you're doing.