You've got a really nice baseline, and some interesting accents in this song. But, I didn't feel that there was really any serious melody kicking in. This song could be great if you had a nice tune to go on top of it or some lyrics. 3/5 7/10.
Good point on the melody. Perhaps I can collaborate with another artist here who can figure a good melody, perhaps even another artist for possible lyrics.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.