I like the beat and chill melody, but I must say original is better. I also found this too much repeativ wich is one of the biggest problems in Progressive house, Trance, etc...
I dont know much what more to say about this, itÂ´s just missing something, maybe try to not use beat all the way the song, use breakbeats n these stuff.
original might be better but i prefer quality (im not saying the original is bad in any way)
and dude electronic music IS repetitive cant put that otherwise,
might aswell tel you the same.. lol
PERSONALLY i hate breakbeats, and PERSONALLY i love chill stuff <3
and this is just laying backwards and listen to the rythm and melody. simple as that.