For a trance song, too fast dude. Slow the BPM down to maybe 130-ish. Bassline's are too basic, get some ingenuity! The song just felt rather barren. You have potential though, I loved the breaks.
Overall,
8/10.
Cheers,
- M3kanist.
Author Comments
This song is based entirely from the emotions of a dream. I woke up a few days ago and simply started it. Of course, it's all over the place and very surreal (to me anyway) as a result, but I think it somehow still meshed together.
Anyway, let me know what you think. I always wanted to make a dream come to life. Did I do it right?
MisterJayElectro responds:
I'll quote what a random Redditor once said: "126BPM trance song? If I had made that in 2004, they'd have kicked me out everywhere I went. Trance is nothing more than progressive house nowadays, and progressive house is horrible". I do appreciate your critique, but I was trying for a more simple, older-style feel here, because my dream was based on childhood events. Probably why it doesn't sound great, though.
On top of that, I didn't even have much of a bassline throughout the song, largely because of the emotions... Yeah, I sound like I'm copping out, it's hard to explain.
Even so, thank you very much for the review! I'm planning on making something similar to this, but more in depth. I just needed to get that emotion on an .flp before I lost it. Now I guess I can add to it and make it worth downloading :P
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 496
- Downloads
- 28
- Score
- Waiting for 4 more votes
- Uploaded
- Mar 5, 2012
- 12:20 AM EST
- Genre
- Trance
- File Info
- Song
- 4.6 MB
- 5 min 4 sec
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