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Mar 2, 2012 | 7:02 PM EST
File Info
2.1 MB
2 min 18 sec
1.00 / 5.00

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Rated 1.00 / 5 stars
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621 Plays | 21 Downloads
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Author Comments

I am going for three voices here, energetic fighter is the second one, the first one is cocky(who also cares for others) and the last one is determined, I used music from SoundBorNe for this, go check out the song! it's in the audio portal



Rated 2 / 5 stars

"Submission for VA contest" by Meta-crimson
Acting: 28/50
Range: 4/25
Fit: 12/25
Mixing: 14/20
Originality: 11/15
Writing: 11/15 n/474243
TOTAL: 80/150
Additional Comments: Try adding a "roll-in" or intro instead of jumping right into the dialog. Raise the gain a bit as well. Give me more enthusiasm!!! There wasn't a lot of range. I think the major issue other than not giving a lot of enthusiasm (though around 2 minutes you let it out a bit and it was MUCH better), is that I would have written a script that woudl have featured your voice better. You could have 1 tough chick, but with your voice being on the higher end, i woudl think about writing a script where you could add someone a bit more light hearted to help you add range. I am glad to see a female voice actor so keep getting better because the world definitely needs more of you!