Okay I'm a little torn, I mean the actual beat that I think you made was pretty good. I've heard this song I mean most FL owners have, but I mean it's like.... the verse you added in from the song really didn't match and the rising sound in the beginning didn't either. It would've sounded a whole lot better if you took those out. I probably took off like a star for that lol. And also I think it was pretty repetitive after a while, I mean you really should try to change it up more than just a 1 minute intro and then the same beat till the end, the beat didn't change almost at all. But seriously I think all the sounds from Fall Silently didn't match, and really them not being there would've been much better. the voice didn't really match the chord you were pulling, and none of it felt very on time. But it's still a cool beat, and you should totally keep trying bro.
Thanks bro. I appreciate all of your feedback.
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