I think this is good. Very nice originals kicks on it. The melody is fine since its not repetitive. I guess all i can say if fine tune this work some more
I loved the beat, the theme, the song overall. Only complaint I have is the voice, I found it really repetitive. But overall it was pretty awesome. 4 out of 5 stars.
Thanks man good feedback, ill start working it right away, you're definitely right!