Really good stuff. The thing I would change is that I feel like the drums, specifically the kick, is a little too busy. Combined with all the other good stuff you have going on in there, it just gets to be a little too cluttered.
Otherwise, you definitely pulled off that epic feel, and a lot there to hold your interest. If you wanted it to be something you sat down and listened to, it would need to be longer, but I'm sure you know that and intended it for another use (like a short flash, apparently).
yeah tbh this was rushed for a friends cartoon and the only drums i had access to were fruity loops shitty FPC, thanks!
I like it very much :) Too short though, want more :(
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.