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This is a 1:30 demo of something im working on. I would really like some feedback on the beat and stuff. Currently its an intro, verse, and chorus. I recorded some lyrics as a place holder for now. Here they are:

So Im at the Club
Poppin bottles like super soakers
And Im at the bar
Bitch actin like I should know her
I said hoe you a 3 on any given day
she said you can take me home anyway
So Im walkin on
lookin for another piece
Im tryna find that brunette with some double D's
While Im lookin around
Everything was fine
Then I spot this cutie
oooh shes gotta be mine!

Plz hit me with some feedback!
I actually wanna finish this one :D



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I'm impressed. You've emulated pop music's general lyrics and voice effects incredibly well. However, you've stuck a decent melody in behind. It's certainly not my thing, but I could definitely see it on the radio. Have fun with it!

ERAmatica responds:

Thanks for the review!

This is hilarious.

I didnt think anyone actually enjoyed producing mainstream house crap.

ERAmatica responds:

Hellz yeah! I made the beat then just came up with some bullshit goofy lyrics!

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Feb 28, 2012
6:57 PM EST
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