Aww... I was expecting Touhou...
Regardless, this piece was okay, but in my opinion the bass was a bit too harsh. It hurt my ears. It also didn't really go anywhere, staying more or less the same throughout the entire piece.
However, my speciality isn't really in this sort of music, so my comments may well be totally out of order, they are simply what I feel.
Thank you very much for your review Hoeloe! I take your critic and I will work on my audio mastering skills.