At the onset I was excited to hear the samples from 'Somebody's Watching Me', however the first verse then regrettably followed.
'J Vorheez' delivered a much better verse, which fit the cadence much better than that of the first and third verses. As it stands, 'Vorheez' appears to be a much more competent, and over all more lyrically skilled artist than yourself (as I am under the impression it is you, the owner of this account, who delivered the first and third verses).
The only redeeming qualities to this work are the song samples and second verse, everything else comes off as amateurish.
Author Comments
This is a song me and my boi made, Let me know what you think!
nice beat
Francis-Po responds:
Thanks, J Vorheez (second verse) made the beat.. Shit goes hard!
Continue and keep it up!
Francis-Po responds:
Will do! and Thanks.. ON a stall right now with my music.. Always happens to me.. I write like 3 songs and then poop out for like 6 months and everyone in my city gets on me about it lol
Yyyeeeaaahhhh..... incredible stuff))) nice mixing)))
Francis-Po responds:
thanks pal, hope all is well!
Great track man! Loved the second guys verse. Keep it up!
Francis-Po responds:
Thanks alot brah!
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 1,749
- Faves:
- 4
- Downloads
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- Votes
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- Score
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4.00 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Feb 23, 2012
- 10:12 PM EST
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Olskool
- File Info
- Song
- 10.1 MB
- 4 min 26 sec
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