"Misadventures of Mouseboy" by bustersquash
Additional Comments: There is a major background hiss and you have a bunch of puffs and pops. instead of doing this all in one take, i would break up your lines and mix them together later. i saw you only put an hour's worth of work into this. If you want to put out a quality recording, you'll have to put in more work than that. You did have a clear distinction between your voices. However I am going to have to Disqualify you for not meeting the criteria for submission length.
I understand thanks for your input and listening, also this was my first submission and since this i have gotten new software that can remove the hiss and pops
Meh, pretty good, could be slightly improved.