My only complaint in this song is that it started too early, and I feel that this song could have benefitted from some more foreplay rather than just jumping into it. Also, the electric guitar part seemed unnecessary and seemed to throw the song off due to it's intensity, sudden stops, bursts of feedback and briefness. i feel as though this song could have benefitted from the removal of that part altogether.
An interesting little song! As scatter foot said there is something lacking in the vocals but you i actually thought they sounded cool kinda like some S carey style vocals. Keep up the good work!
thanks man c: glad you like the tune. I'm thinking of rerecording the vocals anyways, try and smooth out the pitch. I think that's the biggest flaw I can hear. I recorded them fairly quickly becuase I thought the tune was sort of boring without them.
I really like the vibe this song gives off. I especially love the dynamics of the song. The only thing I felt that was lacking a little was the vocals. But, the structure was great and everything is just fantastic.
haha yeah I understand, I'm not much of a singer. It'd be nice to hear someone better on the track ;)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.