Well Done. Very well sung and written.
1: Great song
2: Good mix (The vocals DO NOT drown out the rest of the music)
3: Good for easy listening
My only complaint is that the vocals are a bit too.. er... I am not sure of the word.. Gritty? at times.
On another note, the singer is very good, but he should work on keeping in tune a bit more because there were a few times when he got flat.
...unless that's what you were going for... in that case it worked fine for the song.
Anyways, good song
I swear to the lord, the song is great but the mix is pretty damn bad. For instance, the vocals are too loud and they have a tendency to drown out every other instrument in the song. The drums are almost completely inaudible (except for the cymbals) and the bass (if there is any) is so low in the mix that it doesn't even match with the kicks. The snares also sound like crap when I hear them.
Other than that, it's one of the best pieces i've ever heard on the site, you've got a fantastic voice as well as some serious talent in songwriting and guitar playing. great work on the song, terrible job on the mixing.
This reminds me a lot of Weezer, not my style but well-written all the same.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.