Love this music
Essentially, Goth Rock IS the lyrics. It's usually about sadness, regret, lost love, or just a general loathing for all things alive. PUTTING THE WORD "MONSTER" IN A SONG DOES NOT MAKE IT GOTH ROCK, JERKOFF.
Oh no, he's really going to listen to a level 3 that has no submissions at all. Let's all run from the n00b.
I, think your songs are great, they might sound like oldies but they're cool and better than making a song from punk-o-matic and putting it on there.