3 words - Paul Van D - this "trance" song is super short and really light - reminds of a "weak" dance song. However dont think weak is bad. Some trance pieces are hard and some are in the middle.
The intro needs a bit more spice to it. Add some stops or reverses in the backround. the basic beat is extremely basic. Try and not only mix up the lead but also the background as well.
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