Not sure if you have the slowest rapper in the world doin his thing, but if it's just a breakbeat i like it. Im not sure i support the background synth, and the Hi-hats dont fit the song very well in some portions, they seem to overlap and you can hear it. The Bongo's are way too loud for the song itself, i suggest making their volume at a cool 65%, that would make your break's a lot smoother. Either way this song needs work in my opinion, but you're not too bad either. Keep up the work and maybe you'll make me proud ;).
lol good lookin. yea when i made this i sampled the back ground. i just made the rough copy and left it at that. but thx yo, your reviews are truly helpful!