Now i like this song much more than your other one, it suits the fast rapper beat along with good transitions and follows the right criteria of hip-hop anyway... I dont like the chimes from 0:40 - 1:00 Alone, they dont fit the song well in there with nothing to cover the focus off of it, what i suggest is allow a "beat silence" and bring those in as soon as you drop your other synth's. Nice work on this one, a 4.5 for the effort and good song.
Thx Yo. Much Appreciated!