Loved the sound kick off at 0.33. That's a great intro in any dance song. I feel that the Robotic noises... more specifically the loud "in your face" one at 0.36 that continues on throughout the song overshadows the beat and comes off too loud. In a dubstep that might be a good thing but if your beat/rhythm is overshadowed in a dance track you'll confuse your listeners. You can notice especially during the fade out ending at 2.45 that the noise is much greater than the background beat
Awesome job on the beat and chords. They're sound great. Nice graceful fade out ending. Only real issue is the robotic noise levels, try remastering them to work WITH the music rather than overpowering it.