Not bad, i like the rythm.. but is too short, and it ends too sudden.. ^^ keep it going.
hahah is guesse i should have called it a work in progress then :P i was going to continue and ive already continued it since yesterday so dont wrry ill contiue it and thanks for the support! :)
Dear God man, are you really 14? I like this, and I look forward to seeing what you have coming in the future.
ahahah yea i am, turned 14 yesterday and ive only been making music for about 8 months now ;) thanks for the review :)