Improvements: background synth was a bit loud till the vocals. Vocals had a bit to much distortion, and were a bit loud. Otherwise, pretty badass dude!
All right, so the main problem appears to be the vocals so far. Thank you for reviewing!
The Fade in is an excellent touch here. 0.19 was a great place to introduce your beat. Nice touch at 1.00 with the chords. I'm having a little trouble understanding him... Sounds like hes saying "Please So Good" perhaps you can adjust your audio to fix that... The Voice is a bit Powerful as compared to the rest of the song, that can be overlooked as many electronic voices have that issue. The Stuttering at 1.19 mixed with the chords and beat all at once serves as a bold Climax but it can give a person a headache...
An interesting track. I look forward to reviewing the final Product.
I'll definitely work on the vocals. I think that the 1:19 part might actually sound a lot better if they vocals are fixed. Thanks for your review!