Love the build-up before the 1.00 mark. And the transition to the more upbeat was excellent. I was enjoying the song very much up to about the 1.38 mark. That's when the Nintendo NES sounds caught me off guard a bit. However the beat got really good at 2.00. Enjoyed it from there on out.
Only real advice i'd give is to keep that beat you have established at the end of the song going for a bit. Let that be your "Climax" or boost it up a bit if you'd like. And don't worry too much about "Slowing down" your music's got plenty of energy to keep the listener moving, Use it to grab them. Much like "Fire Aura" did for Kid2Will. I wish I could be of more help. Track is quite promising. Hope to see more of it
it's pretty good, but the ending is too abrupt, it's like it cut off in the middle of a note.
It's a work in progress.