Good backing melody
I feel that the piece could just be expressed as a backing melody to another track - something that has yet to manifest, yet I feel as part of completing this Work in Progress should inevitably come to fruition. There is good potential here, but it is lacking in the variation stakes, losing a little with each looped pass of a few seconds. The drum beat is simple and could easily be re-jigged, to give something with a little more "oompf" and really grab the listener. Some counter melody could be emploted over the top to give some other focus for the senses and allow the listener's mind to wander, particularly with the ambience displayed here.
It could stand to be longer, but only if it has a few things to shore it up and allow the track to bloom into what it years to become.
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Norato 
