Nice beginning of the song. I agree with Waidmann about the chord thing. If you don't feel like being complicated, you could try just repeating the same four chords over and over again and not have to go into the murky swamps of advanced music theory.
The beat's nice. Keep it up.
Shit man You're back....
What can i say...track is alright for some...dark, underground,( ambient?) techno...
but theres two problems and you may already know one of them...
One is Mastering. The lead synth needs to be mastered so its not "killing" the rest of the track. You need to blend all of the elements of the song together so you can a nice mix. Try things like compression and equalizing to achieve a better result.
Second is your Composition. Your chords are...well...not really the best i've heard. They start out nice...but then quickly become out of tune and just...*shudder* not good :/
Im not trying to undermine you or anything but...im just trying to point out the things that i think that need to be worked on for your productions to sound better.
Food For Thought.
Keep it up.
Mastering... yeah I'm totaly f*ked up in that because I don't know a thing about mastering :D
About the chords.
I can't realy start and continue "Progressively" because I lack the skill to make it all connect you know.
Overall. I'm realy a bad user of Fruity loops.
Everything I know is from "toying" with it.
Thus I can never fully create what I want.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.