You're way of doing this music is built for cinematics... you and I will make a full movie one day.
It's nice. Makes me think of the Bleach soundtrack a bit. You might, as Waidmann said, consider changing it a bit to make it a little more interesting, but seeing as you probably want it as a background piece, it should work fine. The loop seems a bit rigid too, though. It also felt like it ended too fast for the song.
Not bad with the piano, but its getting a little stale after the first 10 seconds already.
The cure to that is arpeggiating it a little (My opinion). Overall the song starts off nice...but it drags on for a good 40 seconds....if you arpeggiated it throughout that time span with some soft string chords...most probably would sound alot better :)
Food for thought my friend.
Keep it up.
Thnx will re-upload the new ver.
this one is old and I wanted some feedback
I luv it when people give feedback