Its alright I suppose. For some reason it reminds of a Rage Against the Machine song/beat.
You definitely got the intention right. I instantly got nostalgic about the games. I thank you for getting me back into the mood for a skirmish or playing a singleplayer campaign in one of the C&C games.
Loving it, it Bites like a lion, and skips like a gazelle, I love it.
Definitely has that oldschool/industrial tone to it
Perfect for lots of things
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.