I like what you did with this piece. I didn't notice anything musically wrong with it, but I suppose there's always more that can be added.
Parts of the song sounded like different songs (good ones nonetheless), so maybe next time work on making the transitions neater.
All in all, good job. I'll be voting this 4/4 4/4
I agree with you on the transitions.
Each part is represensative of a character in series. I have a song dedicated to each character though. Thank you for taking your time to review this piece :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.