00:00 Nice and tranquil at the beach just chilling out with some friends
01:05 start swimming and splashing about
01:20 Diving and swimming with the waves
01:52 start heading back to the shore
02:00 get back to shore and start playing some ball games
02:24 decide to go climb the rocks around the coast
02:56 realised that you've gone too far around the rocks and the tide is coming in fast
03:17 some thing in your mind suddenly stops you and your unsure what it is, you close your eyes 03:21 you open your eyes and your some how back at the shore with your friends
That's what came into my brain through that song, was a wee bit repetitive, i think you should have stopped it at 03:30
Still though keep up the good work like "davc" said you've got talent =]
I kind of liked it. It's a good song to put on when your doing something else.
I love the riff but the only problem of it is that it's too repetitive. It gets slightly boring after a while. Maybe you should consider inserting some changes in it or something like that.
Good work anyway. Don't let my rating get you down... You're talented.