Well. It wasn't bad! But, you do need some improvement. Try making the lead more louder than the bass. Because it is bad if you can hear the bass more instead of the lead. Because the lead is the "lead" like in literally terms. I also think you need to put a kick there. I think I hear one, but it is getting hollowed out of the song, from the bass. The snare needs some reverb(with out the wet of course) also it needs some EQ2 to clean it up a bit. Oh and the bass is VERYYYYYYYYY iffy. It's to low, you gotta pitch it up, may to c4 to half-way of c5. Well that is my review! I hope it helped. =)
pretty nice track but the kick drum neeeeeeeeeds to be louder! i almost cant hear it which really is a shame cause the rest is decent.
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