A good buildup, with some nice use of the variety of instruments. Sure, the piece could seem a little short, but I feel that you've got the key components in place. Just build on what you have and make it longer, perhaps adding bit more of a prominent bass beat, combined with a few other variations, to keep the punters interested.
Essentially, you want to do this, without giving the impression that you're dragging it out. The winter sound that you've used at the end of the track is fantastic and to hear it lead into something else would be great - you've given yourself the springboard to lead on with that, so carry on with what you have and improve from there.
Still a piece in development, I feel, but there is certainly something that you can take from this, to help you move on and create a much better piece from it all.
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Thanks Very much... I see exactly what youre saying,, Im working on the bass right now making it more crisp and blending.. And that sound you like at the end, im going to reverse that and put that at the beginning. Thanks bro
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