I think the original is one of the greatest songs ever, so I'm gonna be lenient.
I think there WAS a bit too much salt. The comment about the reverb is very true, but I guess it works kinda well without ruining the song too much. It would just be very unsuitable to play in a large space.
The kick drum needs to be emphasised a bit more, and maybe the melodic synth lines to be introduced a bit earlier, because that's when it starts to really make me smile and my head swing from side to side.
So yeah, overall, not a bad effort, but there are things that need to be sussed out.