That was alright
I think your best to stick with dance
well, i cant say much about this, i didnt like it :( too repetitive and well you need to master your intruments so that they dont collide and create static, the melodies sound way too random which makes it sound very amateurish.. anyways, keep it up i know you can do better.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.