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Apr 4, 2006 | 7:21 AM EDT
File Info
2.8 MB
3 min 4 sec
0.67 / 5.00

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Rated 0.67 / 5 stars
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1,025 Plays | 249 Downloads
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Author Comments

Remade it since it had the most downloads out of all my stuff



Rated 3 / 5 stars

this is in return for kindness

The buildup was too basic, at least switch up the second instrument that was introduced, so that it doesnt play the same bassline as the original pad. The second chord was a bit dischordant, but that ok, i can look past that.

The song really didnt go anywhere
Just a repeat of previous patterns, and i know thats hard to avoid while using fruity loops...i did it for wuite some time, but it will really separate you as an artist by creating a melody that flows between different harmonies.

Aye, it is something i am still developing

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IamMark responds:

yeah i know it is still a bit repetative but if you listened to the first one you would see there has been a LOT of progress as well as a bit more variety. as for the bassline, i like the bass. its...bassy =)


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars


Good work. You put it togheter awsome. I give you 5 in overall because it wasn't my style and a little too slow.

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IamMark responds:

yeah, it was set up like the original so i didnt want to change the general tempo to it. just made it sound more like music with some more variety.