I sort of agree with Aaroca, but I didnt find it too repetitive, but I would suggest a more drum/precussion and bass break like at 1:28 maybe just drop out the melody altogether. Also the piano around 2:55 LOVE piano...maybe make it bigger and brighter by layering it one or two times?
Otherwise I great job!
Thanks for the input!
It's pretty sweet!
The only problem is that it's basically the same thing repeated over and over, so by itself it is isn't something you'd want to listen too all the way through. The melody just becomes stale.
I don't don't like stale food.
No one really does.
Good going though!
Unfortunately, my forte is actually rock music, so I'm still quite inexperienced when it comes to writing different music genres. But thank you for the comment regardless.