I dont always review but you qinned congrats as the others ars saying this qill be the peak of a movue or story part iof some game o you can make your wnstory ok godd
Typos much? :P
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!
I think everyone is wrong!
This belongs in the intro of an RPG or an MMORPG or any medieval game that begins cheery and happy.
A movie is cool too, but this is only 4 minutes.
A separate story can go with it, but imagine playing that story instead.
5 stars, you have talent, use it wisely since it gets harder to find talent every year.
Haha, could be! I didn't make this with any intention of it being used anywhere but it can fit in different scenarios I guess :P.
Thanks a lot for the review!
So, so BEAUTIFUL. It's a really great and emotional piece. I know you've put a lot of effort for this one. I may not be able to make music, but I know good stuff when I hear one.
And thank you to firethunderclash for the imaginative story! It really suits the song!
*p.s Somebody should really make a movie out of this. ;)
Thanks a lot man! I'm surprised you find it emotional because I never actually put any emotion into my works; I just try and go with whatever sounds cool. Still, I'm happy with that!
Yeah, firethunderclash wrote a really fitting story. And I'd obviously be absolutely honoured if someone made a movie for this but I doubt that will ever happen, haha.
Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Very well composed! I can think of a very good story that fits into this music. I'll say the main character would be John. I have a lot of details in this story so be prepared for a long review:
Background info: An invasion has been going on. John and other soldiers are trying to fight back the invasion. However, the invaders are winning.
0:00-0:15 - John is walking back through a forest to protect his village.
0:16 -0:20 - However, as he moves the last bush he finds out his village was invaded.
0:21-0:32 - John could not believe it. He looks at each house only to find bits of wood and furniture
and also dead bodies.
0:33- 0:43 - He soon reaches his house that is just the same as the other houses except one room still stands: his parents' room.
0:44-0:57 - Slowly, he lifts the tavern, shaking. Fearing of what to find in there. Then, a single tear is shed from the main character.
0:58-1:06 - He saw the most horrible image that will stick to
his mind for eternity: his parents bodies lying on the floor. Dead with blood oozing out. More tears came. The tears that exploded with anger and revenge.
1:07-1:27 - He prepares in a secret hut. He takes a knife, a map, a sword, and rope. He then put puts on a coat and walks out of the hut.
1:28-1:48 - He travels through a forest, a desert, a mountain range, and exits from another forest. Each scene has different camera views.
1:49-1:57 - Tired from all the walking, he notices a cliff.
1:58-2:10 - John gets a good view of the castle the invaders live.
2:11-2:27 - Night falls, John quietly climbs over the wall with the rope and sneaks past the guards in the courtyard.
2:28-2:56 - A series of scenes happen. John runs a hallway in the background while scenes appear of events where John is sneaking past the guards.
2:57-3:00 - John slows to a stop. He is just outside the king's room.
3:01-3:07 - John creeps behind the king slowly and knocks him out with a punch.
3:08-3:19 - Slowly he takes his sword and with the utmost hatred, drove it through the king's heart.
3:20-4:00 - He returns back to his village (without getting caught) and buries the bodies of his parents. Mourning over their faces as rain continues to fall. A tear from John falls down and makes the last note as it his the ground.
This is just my view on how I interpret this music. Although I do say this piece could also represent someone trying to find safety. Anyway, awesome piece and continue to make great music!
Aw dude that's a really imaginative story. I was following it along with the music and hearing the music fit so perfectly in your story that I got the chills!
Thanks a lot man, really creative scene. I'm glad you liked the track :3.
Could go great as Credits to a movie, or an opener to a video game RPG =)
Heh, thanks! I'm glad you think so.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.