I thought at the beginning, this is promising but it went quieter and quieter further on in the song. It had the potential but it didn't came out.
Was really suspenseful when it started, and then progressively got less suspenseful as it went on, and then lacked an ending. Very "meh"
It is meant to loop, thats why there's no ending.
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