There is some fuzz during the first minute of the song or so. Try to clear that up. I listened to the other bird and it is fuzzy too I think you need a better mic to record your instruments, i'm guessing your using a keyboard. Or you can hook your keyboard directly to the keyboard and record it like that to minimalize feedback.
Yeah, thats what I have started to do with my other songs.
Very rockin and action packed peice. You need more than midi though!!!! This would sound so much greater with more solid sounding sounds.
I loved it by the way/ :)
I won $40 for this piece, but I submitted it in written form... so quailty wasn't that much of an issue.